American Public University System Business Essay

Development proposal includes some interesting ideas – including the museum concept but needs a lot more detail on the specifics of the proposal. Report does a good job of identifying potential benefits of this type of project, but because there is not a lot of detail and it is not supported with information about the neighborhood context it’s difficult to connect the benefits to the proposal. Analysis would be much stronger if you used examples/case studies that are more relevant to the site and its context, additionally, it is difficult to tell where you have supported your claims because of the lack of citation.