CUNY BMCC Power of Experiential Marketing Paper

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Instructions: Choose an article that relates to our current module. Write one paragraph per prompt. Each paragraph should be at least three sentences. The full instructions appear on the next page. I will provide example responses below but I encourage you to write in your own voice. Please keep the prompts in place so your answers are clearly separated.

1.What is the main idea of the article? What supporting details does the author provide?

Answer: In “(title of article),” (author’s last name) explains that (paraphrase main idea). One reason is (paraphrase first supporting detail). Additionally, (paraphrase other supporting details).  

2.How does this article connect to our current module and why is it important? What new ideas emerge from reading these together? What questions arise for you?

Answer: This article connects to the PowerPoint/textbook for chapter (#) because (identify the connection). After reading (paraphrase of textbook material), it enhances my understanding of the article by (explain how the skill in the textbook applies here). One question that arises for me is (identify something you would now wonder about or wish to examine further.)

3.What is your opinion of what you read in the article? Why is this important to you?

Answer: I believe that this is important to examine for several reasons. One reason is … Secondly, … Lastly … One comment that caught my attention was (include quotation here). In my opinion (agree or disagree with the quotation you shared).

4.Please provide a link to the article here:

Link:  (Paste link here.)

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Journal 1.

Thinking Activity 8.2: Review the following passage, which is an example of the process-analysis pattern of thinking, then answer the questions that follow.

“If you are inexperienced in relaxation techniques, begin by sitting in a comfortable chair with your feet on the floor and your hands resting easily in your lap. Close your eyes and breathe evenly, deeply, and gently. As you exhale each breath let your body become more relaxed. Starting with one hand direct your attention to one part of your body at a time. Close your fist and tighten the muscles of your forearm. Feel the sensation of tension in your muscles. Relax your hand and let your forearm and hand become completely limp. Direct all your attention to the sensation of relaxation as you continue to let all tension leave your hand and arm. Continue this practice once or several times each day, relaxing your other hand and arm, your legs, back, abdomen, chest, neck, face, and scalp. When you have this mastered and can relax completely, turn your thoughts to scenes of natural tranquility from your past. Stay with your inner self as long as you wish, whether thinking of nothing or visualizing only the loveliest of images. Often you will become completely unaware of your surroundings. When you open your eyes you will find yourself refreshed in mind and body.” —Laurence J. Peter, The Peter Prescription

1.Identify the purpose of the passage.

Answer:

2.Describe the main stages in the process identified by the author.

Answer:

Thinking Activity 8.3: We tend to be most acutely aware of process analysis when we are learning a new activity for the first time, such as preparing formula for an infant or installing a new oil filter in a car. Identify such an occasion in your own life.

1.Describe the steps or stages in the process.

Answer:

2.How might you modify this process if a problem arose? Identify one real life or hypothetical problem and how you could adapt the process to respond.

Miami Dade College From Babbling to Books Discussion Questions

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From Babbling to Books: Building Pre-Reading Skills

Featuring Todd R. Risley, Sharon Landesman Ramey, and Julie Washington discussing research-based strategies for developing language and pre-reading skills in young children.

Our professional development webcast series (Links to an external site.)

Program description

Young children who perform better than their peers in reading do so for several reasons, but one of the most overlooked is this – lots of family talk. Far too many young children come to school with poor oral language skills because they just don’t know enough words. The good news is that helping a young child is simple. By engaging kids in rich stories and having meaningful conversations with them, you – as a parent or a daycare provider or a preschool teacher – can help improve their oral language skills, which will eventually help them become better readers.

This 60-minute webcast stresses the importance of working with young children early to develop language and pre-reading skills. It will provide adults who work with young children with research-based strategies that can help lay the foundation for building strong readers. This webcast is sponsored in part by Scholastic, the global children’s publishing, education and media company.

From Babbling to Books: Building Pre-Reading Skills is available for purchase at our online store, LearningStore (Links to an external site.).

Presenters

Todd R. Risley is professor emeritus of psychology at the University of Alaska and former professor of human development and senior scientist of the Bureau of Child Research at the University of Kansas. He is the co-author of Meaningful Differences in the Everyday Experience of Young American Children and Learning to Talk.

Sharon Landesman Ramey is the director of the Center for Health and Education at Georgetown University. Drs. Sharon and Craig Ramey are widely considered to have done the most extensive work to date on what permanently enhances development in young children. Their numerous studies have shown dramatic gains in learning and accomplishment as the result of nurturing care in early childhood.

Julie Washington is a professor in the department of audiology and speech language pathology at Wayne State University. Her research focus is language development and language disorders in African American children at the time of school entry and emergent literacy skills of high-risk preschoolers.

After carefully observing the webcast please respond to each question displaying a “thick understanding” of what you learned.

www.readingrockets.org (Links to an external site.)

After observing the video respond to each of the following questions, showing a gain of knowledge in speech, language, and the reading process.

  1. What does Dr. Risley say about how language is developed in babies and young

children?

  1. What does Dr. Washington discuss and share about how language is developed in young children?
  2. How does a child begin to assign meanings to words?
  3. “Reading is not necessarily the point of a book “—-for babies and/or very young children. What is explained as to what parents can do in order to interact with the child/baby and a book.
  4. In the classroom video clip how do teachers use books to stimulate children’s’ language development?
  5. Explain what you learned from the video clip of Dr. Washington at work at the University of Michigan.
  6. What is the connection between speaking and reading?
  7. Why should we pay attention to “late talkers?”
  8. What does Dr. Washington say that speech-language pathologists can do to help students with the reading process?

Experiences & Responses of US Citizens During & After Covid 19 Pandemic Analysis

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PART 4: FINAL PROJECTData Collection: You will conduct a data collection and analysis process for the method that you have selected in Part 3. You will collect and analyze only one sample of data. This could include an interview, survey, document or social media analysis, or photo voice/digital story. As you analyze your data, reflect and record the following, which will be pertinent to your final project: 1) what themes arose in your data? 2) how does this data help you better understand your research topic? 3) use the concepts/ideas/theories from your methodology to contextualize your results, and 4) what questions/concerns arose for you during the research process? A NOTE ON THE RESEARCH PROCESS: • You should plan to spend approximately 40 minutes to 1 hour doing your interview, survey or photovoice. Questions should be based on an attitude of respect for the interview subject and appreciation for the time they have given to you. • You must tell your research participant who you are and that you are doing the research as part of an assignment in a York University undergraduate course. You must also tell 5 your participant that a pseudonym will be used instead of their real name in your project report. You are required to inform your participant that they have the right to terminate the interview/survey at any time or to decline to answer any questions. You must go to your interview/survey/photovoice etc. with an Informed Consent Form – which must be signed before the process can begin. Remember that you need to give your participant time to read the form carefully. • You are required to maintain all informed consent forms in a sealed container, securely in your possession until the end of the course, at which time it will need to be shredded. Please keep any digital (audio/photo/video) data on a secure laptop or desktop and delete the data at the end of this course. The final project should include the following elements: 1. Set the context for your research topic: what are you investigating? Why does it matter? What are your research aims and objective(s)? 2. Research findings and discussion: Use the literature and scholarly analysis to delve more deeply. What is the theoretical context for this issue and how is it being understood? What are the debates? Then ask: What are the key themes that have arisen in your research investigation? Does your research data concerning the University reflect issues and themes that arise in the scholarly literature? Do certain theoretical approaches, studies, cases or examples help you to interpret your data? Ask: How did the University respond to this issue? Why? 3. Reflection & Recommendations: To what extent does the University’s response perpetuate, reproduce, or disrupt power dynamics, social structures and/or cultural norms? What recommendations would you make to the University to better address the issue? Close by reflecting on the research process and if/how you might have approached your research assignment differently a second time around. How might a shift in your positionality impact how you (re)interpret your research topic? Looking back, would you apply a different lens/methodology? How might this shape your selection of methods? 4. Bibliography: List your interview and all published secondary sources. Please make sure to reference all ideas and information not your own. 

NVCC The Best Careers in The Fourth Industrial Revolution Script

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For this assignment, you will develop a written script for a 3-5 minute podcast (about 450-650 words). Your podcast can be just you speaking alone, an interview with a friend or family member, a panel interview where you talk to 3 or 4 people, or even in play format with several characters. 

Instructions

Review these resources about developing a podcast.

“How to Make Your Podcast Stand Out in a Crowded Market” (Links to an external site.) by Roberta Kwok

How to – Radio & Podcasting – Recording (Links to an external site.)

Choose a Topic 

  • Music Genre, Artist, or Album: Write a podcast script in which you will teach your audience about a specific music genre, artist, or album. Using the rhetorical devices, persuade your listeners that  the genre, artist, album is noteworthy, . (Do not use copyrighted music in your podcast.)

Dream Job:  Write a podcast script in which you will teach your audience about aspects of your dream job. For example, if you want to be a marine biologist, persuade your listeners that marine biology is an excellent career, using the rhetorical devices. 

College Success Skills: Write a podcast script in which you will teach your audience about college success skills. Refer to the skills you learned in the last unit (avoiding procrastination and plagiarism, learning a new writing process to avoid writer’s block, developing time management skills).  Using the rhetorical devices, persuade your listeners that these skills will promote future success, . 

  • Do Research

Find at least three (3) credible sources to include in your podcast.

Plan how your will incorporate and use these sources to support your ideas and to provide evidence. You will use quotations, statistics, and other salient information from these sources in your podcast.

*Important: Use the CRAAP Test (Links to an external site.) (The CRAAP Test – Evaluating Sources – Research Guides at Benedictine University Library) to help you choose academic sources that are appropriate for the rhetorical situation. 

Draft a Script

Beginning: Begin the script with the title and date of the podcast. Introduce the topic and the speakers in an inviting and engaging way. 

Main Points: State, support, and persuade your audience. Use sources you find on the internet to support your opinions. Include a reference to the source within the sentence. Use signal phrases to introduce a reference to the article. (For more tips on incorporating quotes, see UNC’s webpage on Quotations (Links to an external site.).)

Ending: End creatively. 

  • Format the Script 

Format the text of your script like the one you looked at for the podcast “The Haunting Effects of Going Days Without Sleep.” (Links to an external site.) 

  • Sources: Add a Works Cited list at the end of your script. Include citations for all sources, including the sound bytes.

Sound: Find 2-3 sound bytes for your podcast. Choose sounds that are NOT copyrighted. See this Creative Commons web page of Image, Video and Audio Resources (Links to an external site.) that includes a long list of suggested sound websites. Scroll down the page to the Audio Resources section. Indicate where each sound byte will be in the script. Use parentheses to show the sound location and include a description of the sound, for example (Soundbite of Applause).

Los Angeles Valley College Impact of Aluminum Cans on Society and Environment Critique

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Please answer the questions below using the script of In the Heights, video documentary

  1. Identify a theme from the musical and discuss how this theme evolves and unfolds throughout the play. Please make reference to specific lyrics, dialogue or characters to support your ideas
  2. In the Heights was written, in part, to redress the lack of roles on Broadway for Latinx actors and to create Latinx characters that moved beyond stereotype. Analyze one of the characters in the musical and discuss how he or she does or does not exemplify a complex identity that cannot be reduced to a stereotype.
  3. Community is an important concept in the musical In the Heights; how the characters support one another in times of crisis. Give an example of a moment in the musical when you see the community being resilient and coming together to overcome an obstacle.
  4. What is the cultural context of In the Heights? In the Heights follows the traditional formula of a classic American Broadway musical, but Lin-Manuel Miranda contextualizes this formula within Latinx culture, integrating bilingual lyrics and fusing various styles of music including hip hop, rap, salsa, R&B, funk, dance beat, waltz, bolero, pop ballad, reggaeton, merengue, and bachata. The musical blends his classic and contemporary sensibilities while celebrating the Latinx community and promoting positive representation of Latinx characters. Why does the play stage so many cultural forms and what does this format reveal about the intentions of the playwright?
  5. Some theatre historians believe that theatre functions as a mirror of society, reflecting a society’s beliefs, tensions and desires. Other critics have suggested that theatre is more than a mirror held up, but instead serves as a vehicle for social change and transformation. What do you believe? Using In the Heights as an example, please explain what you believe to be the function of theatre/musical theatre in relation to social change?
  6. a.There have been several productions of In the Heights, in which a non-Latino actor was cast in the role of Usnavi. What are your thoughts about the potential problems of having an actor of a different ethnicity playing Usnavi? If you were producing this musical what would your casting parameters be and why? The film was criticized for not hiring or showcasing actors with darker skin tones. Did you notice this and if so how could the film have done a better job representing the diversity within Latin communities?

6. b. How was it for you to watch the film version of this musical. What was lost and what was gained in the translation from page to screen?

7. Write a thesis statement or pose a research question as if you were writing a paper on In the Heights. You are not writing the paper, but I want you to practice creating a thesis statement that can be argued. For example, In the Heights is about immigrants in New York,” is not an argument, actually it is a topic. To transform a topic into an argument you need to identify a problem.

“Although Usnavi ultimately does not return to the Dominican Republic, this play is very much about an immigrant’s longing for home/search for his roots.”

To complicate your thesis and you need to make a claim that you can explore. You might add,

“Usnavi must find in the freedom to return or the courage to stay.”

Purdue University Thematic Connections Essay

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For this assignment, read Gods of Jade and Shadow, and watch the films Hunt for the Wilderpeople and Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon. Using ALL three of the assigned works–Gods of Jade and Shadow, Hunt for the Wilderpeople, and Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon–identify, analyze, and explain the significance of a thematic connection between all three texts.

What are the authors saying about the theme, and how is it demonstrated in the text? What can we take away from this

IN EACH BODY PARAGRAPH, YOU WILL BE REQUIRED TO HAVE AT LEAST THREE QUOTES FROM ALL THREE SOURCES. THIS MEANS THAT EACH BODY PARAGRAPH SHOULD INCLUDE 1 QUOTE FROM GODS OF JADE AND SHADOW, 1 QUOTE FROM HUNT FOR THE WILDERPEOPLE, AND 1 QUOTE FROM CROUCHING TIGER, HIDDEN DRAGON.

QUESTIONS TO CONSIDER:

  • Without limiting yourself to the main characters, how do three of the characters from the various texts forge their own paths to become heroes?
  • What role does patan play in helping or hindering the success of the hero?
  • Does rebellion help or hurt the success of the hero?
  • What roles do mentors (or family) play in the development of the hero?
  • How does forgiveness allow the characters to reach their full potential?
  • How do the obstacles in the stories help the characters to transform or become more than they thought they were capable of?
  • Employing the skills you utilized and honed in the Unit 1 Essay, write a 4- to 6-page academic essay (at least 1500 words), employing MLA Style formatting and documentation throughout
  • The essay should have a minimum of 6 paragraphs, including an introduction, 4 body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
  • Begin with an introductory paragraph that hooks your reader’s attention, provides background information about the three works, and leads seamlessly into a clearly stated thesis.
  • Develop body paragraphs which incorporate quoted and detailed evidence from our course materials (Hunt for the Wilderpeople, Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon, and Gods of Jade and Shadow) while using proper MLA format to cite the texts.
    • Quoted evidence should be incorporated thoughtfully and thoroughly into the essay by establishing context, introducing the quoted/paraphrased/summarized passages, and explaining how the passages support the main ideas of the body paragraphs and the essay as a whole.
      • Include at least three quoted passages from three different sources in each body paragraph (1 from Gods of Jade and Shadow; 1 from Hunt for the Wilderpeople; 1 from Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon)
      • Essays that use APA or any other format other than MLA or that include ANY outside sources will earn a maximum of 50% on the assignment. Students who do any of the preceding will not be allowed to revise the assignment for a higher score.
    • Conclude your essay with a well-developed reflection of the theme and its significance. Answer the proverbial “So what?” question. What can we, your readers, gain or learn from your analysis? What is the treasure we take away?
    • Outside sources are not allowed for this essay. Any essays that use outside sources will earn a maximum of 50% on the assignment
  • Include a Works Cited page that includes all three sources (Hunt for the Wilderpeople, Gods of Jade and Shadow, Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon).

Please cite each source after quoting on essay with authors last name and page number

theme to consider – gender women’s roles

EDU 621 Belhaven University Education Classes Discussion

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Reply to 

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At the school I work at, for our interventions with the students the teachers are responsible for all tier II documentation. If the student is in tier III their is an interventionist who will come pull the student and work with them for 30 mins if not a little longer. There are usually 4-6 students to 1 teacher in the intervention room.

To me I do not think intervention works as well as we hope it would. When there are student who are performing at a kindergarten level, but are in third and fourth grade there’s a problem. We do have a lot of EL students at our school so a language barrier is present. However, the tier system to me is very cookie cutter and not all students will fit that cookie cutter mold. Our interventions need to be more differentiated to better help our students.

The paperwork for doing interventions is overwhelming. It’s like an endless mountain of paperwork each time the child is pulled for the intervention. I do believe interventions can be very helpful and improve student learning, but I also believe there has to be a better way of providing interventions for our students that will benefit each individual student.

2. 

Discuss the intervention (RtI, Tier I, II, III) process in your school. How well is it working? Who is responsible for delivering instruction at the different tier levels? What about the paperwork involved?

I’m sure other districts are like the district I’m teaching in. Since I’ve been in the district, local schools use progress monitoring, work samples, student observations, and teacher test data to determine which intervention group a student should be in. There is a total of three different intervention groups: tier 1, tier 2, and tier 3.

In tier 1 intervention group, general instructions are provided to all students in a classroom setting. This intervention group is designed to provided learning access to all grade-level curriculum. In this group, all students are part of the instruction and additional intervention is based on the instruction the teacher is given. The second intervention group is tier 2 intervention group. During this intervention group, students who share and demonstrate similar skill insufficiencies or social/emotional/behavioral risk characteristics are apart of this group. In this intervention group, a collaborative interventional plan is created, supervised, and documented. For this intervention group, administrators are responsible. However, the general education teacher should share responsibility for the instructional planning and the decision-making process for these students. The last intervention group is tier 3 intervention. Tier 3 intervention group is the most intense group. Tier 3 intervention students are those who work in small groups, or individual lessons. Majority of the students in this group can get their support in a general education classroom. Yet, they may spend bigger parts of the day in a resource room. These students are inclusive in a general ed classroom but need additional support and tutorial. During our intervention blocks, we are directed to work with the students depending on their individual or group needs. Students are required to sign in and teachers are required to provide each student with a folder to keep track of their progress.

Edited by Vantashia Jones“>Vantashia Jones on Apr 14 at 5:15pm 

New York University Political Science Essay

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A Project Proposal is attached that was reviewed and comments weremade for correction for the research paper. The project proposalattached is like what was submitted as the first step of the projectproposal. The comments are done in red on the beginning and end. Thiswill help guide what will be needed for the research paper. Theguidelines for the paper are below

Your final paper must be atleast 8-10 pages long and should rely on at least 6 sources. Pleasefollow these guidelines when writing your paper:

1.Itis useful to work from a written outline. You will, of course, changeparts of the paper around or even drop items from the original outlineentirely, but it is helpful to have an idea of what you are writingabout before you actually start writing.

2.Papers must have an introduction and a conclusion framing the body of the work. Hint: Write the introduction to your paper afteryou have written everything else. It will ensure that your introductionaccurately reflects what you have written in your paper, and will avoidthe instructor wondering why you said in the intro. that you were goingto talk about one thing, when in fact you talked about another thingentirely. Such a realization on the part of your instructor invariablyleads to a precipitous drop in the paper grade.

3.Theword novel should only be used to refer to a work of fiction. Do notrefer to a piece of academic writing or non-fiction as ‘a novel’.

4.Italicizebook titles, journal titles, newspaper titles, DVD/movie titles,documentary titles, etc. Only use quotation marks around the title of anarticle. Ex: John Smith, “How Writing History Papers Saved My Life andBrought Me Inner Peace,” New Academic 1:5, 46-112.

5.Bewareof shifting verb tenses (especially in the same sentence!). As ageneral rule, it is easiest to stay in past tense when you are writinghistory papers. The exception is when you are directly referencing anauthor’s work (even when they are dead). Example: “In his work The Interpretation of Dreams, Freud says….”

6.Pleasekeep in mind the following pitfalls; there are others, but these arethe most frequent I have encountered over the years:

  • know the difference between to (preposition), too (also), two (the number)
  • throne (something you sit on), thrown (past tense of ‘to throw’)
  • lead (a metal), led (past tense of ‘to lead’)
  • their (possessive), there (adverb), they’re (contraction of they are)
  • its (possessive), it’s (contraction of it is)
  • among not amongst and while not whilst
  • who (subject) and whom (object)
  • due to (adjectival; nouns) and because of (adverbial; verbs) (https://grammar.yourdictionary.com/vs/due-to-vs-because-of-distinctions-and-proper-use.html)

  1. Beconsistent with your capitalization. If you are using ‘Socialism’ and‘Capitalism’ in the introduction (which is the proper form, by the way),make sure you continue using ‘Socialism’ and ‘Capitalism’ in the bodyof your paper and not ‘socialism’ and ‘capitalism’. Note: Socialism,Capitalism, Nationalism should always be capitalized; socialists,capitalists, nationalists should not be.

8.Proofread!Spellcheck is not enough. I highly recommend reading your papers out loud after you have written them. It is an excellent way to make surethat your writing is clear and makes sense. If you read it out loud and asentence sounds strange to your ear, there is most likely somethingwrong with it. Figure out what needs fixing and fix it.

UWB Conversation Entry Exercise

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Conversation entries are your way of conversing with the writers, artists, critics and scholars that we are reading/viewing/listening for our class. For our class, we will post publicly (in discussion boards) so that you can read alongside each other and build knowledge collectively in conversation. If there is more than one reading assigned, you do not have to write a separate entry for each reading, but I expect that you will be comprehensive rather than focusing only on one reading (or some of the reading). What this means is that if we have readings spanning two days from two different books, I expect your conversation entry to address both books. For the sake of this particular Conversation Entry, the reading to cover would be the reading assigned for the previous Thursday and for this Tuesday. Please respond to the following questions in response to the reading (with a minimum of 300 words for this total Conversation Entry). Please include a word count at the end of your post.

1) Note any words or phrases that are unfamiliar to you or that are used in a special sense. List them below and choose one to generate a Hundreds on what this new word or phrase brings to you in your lexicon/vocabulary. For a good example of this, look up an entry in Counter-Desecration: A Glossary for Writing Within the Anthropocene (edited by Linda Russo, Marthe Reed, Allison Adelle Hedge Coke). The library has an online copy you can access (Links to an external site.) (or I do recommend it as a useful book to have on hand as a creative reference):

a.

b.

Hundreds:

2) Note two specific concepts that stand out to you as noteworthy in some way and why. This can be something totally new to you or something that you had never thought about in exactly this way (e.g. seeing it through a new lens). List them below and choose one to generate a Hundreds on what this new concept brings to the field of your thinking.

a.

b.

Hundreds:

3) Choose one line or sentence that you think speaks to the heart of this reading OR choose one line or sentence that you find really generative for you in your writing and thinking and write this sentence below. Then, write an additional line in response – could be a counterpoint, a line to keep digging below the surface, a line excavating the structure.

Line from reading:

Your line:

4) Using one of the concepts above, create a question you can ask the rest of the class about the concept. Using “how,” “why,” or “in what ways” as your beginning will elicit detailed responses instead of simple answers. Please make the question specific to a question of writing content or craft.

5) What item (or items) did you find confusing, puzzling or perplexing in the reading for class? Note the item and be sure to ask for a clarification.

6) Based on your answers to Questions 2 and 3, what questions are you interested in posing to thewriter(s), artist(s), critic(s) and scholar(s) of this work? Because we will have Quenton Baker and Paul Hlava Ceballos visiting, please post questions for them (not the other authors). How is this related to your own writing?

UofM Personal Narrative Essay

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Prompt

Now that we have read and analyzed example narrative essays by Asao Inoue, Robin Wall Kimmerer, and Octavia Butler, you will write your own personal narrative. In this type of essay, the first-person pronoun “I” is acceptable. Remember that a narrative tells a story, and a narrative essay tells a story that makes a point. This essay form requires that we shape our story to emphasize the point we are making by choosing illustrative details.

Your personal narrative essay needs to be at least 3 full, properly formatted pages (the revised version will be 4 full pages)and detail a story about your experience(s). It needs to make a point that answers the question: What should your readers learn from your meaningful experience(s)?

To write a successful personal narrative essay:

Choose one or two specific moments to write about in detail.

Plan and draft to ensure the details are illustrating a clear main point.

Revise and edit to create a cohesive and readable essay.

Tips and Suggestions

You are welcome to use pieces of previous assignment *from this class* as long as you improve and revise them while incorporating them into your narrative essay.

  1. Some writers start with the point they want to make and then look for illustrative examples and moments. Some writers start with meaningful moments and then analyze them to draw out a relevant point. Both methods can be productive.

Choose Specific Moments:

  1. If you want to tell the story of the best class you took, tell me about the best day or the best assignment in that class, describe the classroom, describe the weather, give people names, tell me what happened, how did different people react, what did you think, why do you remember this particularly moment, etc. Include visual, auditory, and tactile sensory details.

“Show, Don’t Tell!” Instead of telling your reader “this happened in September,” consider showing them with something like: “As I walked to class, I felt a chill in the quiet, still morning air and saw the leaves in front of the big purple house on the corner show hints of their fiery, orange fall foliage.”

  1. Plan and Draft:

Introduction

Start specific and set the scene with descriptive and sensory details. Include a thesis statement that states the point or lesson that the reader will learn.

Body Paragraphs

  • Your experiences are evidence that support your overall point.
  • Detail your experiences in the body paragraphs and consider whether you will tell the story chronologically or whether you want to include flashbacks and play with time a bit.

Each new paragraph marks a change or transition. Consider how each paragraph leads into the next.

Conclusion

  • The conclusion is a moment for summary, analysis, and reflection. Reinforce the lesson learned or point being made, and consider sharing why the moments you have chosen to share continue to be meaningful and relevant to your life now.
  • Revise and Edit

After you have finished your draft, print your essay if you can.

Does every paragraph have a focus? Is the order of paragraphs and ideas logical? Cut any unnecessary or disconnected sentences and move paragraphs and ideas around to try to guide your reader through the story.

Read your essay out loud to yourself. Correct any minor mistakes as you go. Notice any sentences that you can’t quite comfortably voice; consider revising to simplify. Take a note of any grammar or syntax questions that come up.